2013 年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试 (天津卷) 英语 笔试

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As I held my father's hands one night, I couldn't help but notice their calluses (老茧) and roughness. His hands tell the story of his life as a farmer, including all his struggles.

One summer, I remember, a drought (旱灾) hit Ontario, turning it into a burning desert. On one of those hot mornings I was picking sweet corn with my dad to fill the last order from the grocery store. Fifty dozen was all we needed, which normally took twenty minutes. That morning, however, the process didn't go quickly. After forty minutes of aimlessly walking in the field, we still needed twenty dozen. I was completely frustrated and angry. Dropping the basket heavily, I declared, "If the store wants its last twenty dozen, they can pick it themselves!" Dad laughed. "Just think, my little girl, only ten dozen left for each of us and then we're done." Such is Dad whatever problem he meets with, he never gives up.

Unfortunately, the disastrous effects of the drought were felt all over our county. It was a challenging time for everyone, but Dad remained optimistic. He continued to be grateful for other things like good health and food on our plates. Only then did I truly begin to appreciate Dad and his faith that guided us through the hard times.

Dad is also a living example of real love. From dawn to dusk, he works countless hours to support our family. He always puts our happiness before his own, and never fails to cheer me on at my sports games in spite of his exhaustion after long days. His loving and selfless nature has inspired me to become more sympathetic and considerate, putting others first.

Dad, the life lessons I have learned from you will stay with me forever. You are my father, teacher, friend and most importantly, my hero.

全文中文翻译

有天晚上，我握着爸爸的手，忍不住注意到他手上的老茧和粗糙。他的手，讲述了他作为一个农民的一生，包括他所有的奋斗。

我记得有一年夏天，安大略遭遇了旱灾，把那里变成了滚烫的沙漠。在一个炎热的早上，我和爸爸在摘甜玉米，要完成杂货店的最后一个订单。我们只需要50打，正常来说，这只需要20分钟。但是那天早上，这个过程没有很快进行，在田里漫无目的地走了40分钟之后，我们还需要20打。我彻底崩溃了，很生气，我把篮子重重地扔在地上，说：“如果杂货店要那20打，他们自己来摘！”爸爸笑了：“想想看，我的小宝贝，我们每个人只需要摘10打，然后我们就做完了。”这就是爸爸，不管他遇到什么问题，他都从不放弃。

不幸的是，整个县都受到了旱灾的影响，对所有人来说，这都是很有挑战的时期，但爸爸还是很乐观。他还是继续感恩其他的事，比如健康，还有我们盘子里的食物。直到那时候，我才真正开始理解爸爸，还有他带领我们度过难关的信念。

爸爸也是真爱的活生生的例子，从早到晚，他工作无数个小时，来养活我们家。他总是把我们的幸福放在他自己的前面，哪怕累了一天，他也会来我的运动会上给我加油。他的爱和无私，激励我变得更有同情心，更体贴，把别人放在第一位。

爸爸，我从你那里学到的人生教训，会永远留在我身边。你是我的爸爸、老师、朋友，最重要的是，你是我的英雄。

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Guide to Stockholm University Library

Our library offers different types of studying places and provides a good studying environment.

Zones

The library is divided into different zones. The upper floor is a quiet zone with over a thousand places for silent reading, and places where you can sit and work with your own computer. The reading places consist mostly of tables and chairs. The ground floor is the zone where you can talk. Here you can find sofas and armchairs for group work.

Computers

You can use your own computer to connect to the Wi-Fi specially prepared for notebook computers; you can also use library computers, which contain the most commonly used applications, such as Microsoft Office. They are situated in the area known as the Experimental Field on the ground floor.

Group-study places

If you want to discuss freely without disturbing others, you can book a study room or sit at a table on the ground floor. Some study rooms are for 2-3 people and others can hold up to 6-8 people. All rooms are marked on the library maps.

There are 40 group-study rooms that must be booked via the website. To book, you need an active University account and a valid University card. You can use a room three hours per day, nine hours at most per week.

Storage of Study Material

The library has lockers for students to store course literature. When you have obtained at least 40 credits (学分), you may rent a locker and pay 400 SEK for a year's rental period.

Rules to be Followed

Mobile phone conversations are not permitted anywhere in the library. Keep your phone on silent as if you were in a lecture and exit the library if you need to receive calls.

Please note that food and fruit are forbidden in the library, but you are allowed to have drinks and sweets with you.

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1. Zones: The upper floor is a quiet zone with over a thousand places for silent reading, and places where you can sit and work with your own computer. The ground floor is the zone where you can talk. Here you can find sofas and armchairs for group work.

句型拆分：定语从句where you can...。

中文翻译：区域：上层是安静区，有超过1000个安静阅读的位置，还有可以坐下来用自己电脑工作的位置。一楼是可以说话的区域，那里有沙发和扶手椅，适合小组工作。

2. Computers: You can use your own computer to connect to the Wi-Fi specially prepared for notebook computers; you can also use library computers, which contain the most commonly used applications, such as Microsoft Office.

句型拆分：非限制性定语从句which...。

中文翻译：电脑：你可以用自己的电脑连专门给笔记本电脑准备的Wi-Fi，你也可以用图书馆的电脑，里面有最常用的软件，比如微软办公软件。

3. Group-study places: There are 40 group-study rooms that must be booked via the website. To book, you need an active University account and a valid University card. You can use a room three hours per day, nine hours at most per week.

句型拆分：定语从句that must be booked...。

中文翻译：小组学习室：有40个小组学习室，必须在网站上预订，预订需要你有有效的大学账户和校园卡，你每天可以用一个房间3小时，每周最多9小时。

4. Storage of Study Material: The library has lockers for students to store course literature. When you have obtained at least 40 credits (学分), you may rent a locker and pay 400 SEK for a year's rental period.

句型拆分：时间状语从句When...。

中文翻译：学习材料存放：图书馆有储物柜，给学生放课程资料，当你拿到至少40学分，你就可以租一个储物柜，一年400瑞典克朗。

5. Rules: Mobile phone conversations are not permitted anywhere in the library. Please note that food and fruit are forbidden in the library, but you are allowed to have drinks and sweets with you.

句型拆分：宾语从句that...。

中文翻译：规定：图书馆里任何地方都不能打电话，手机要静音，如果你要接电话，要出去。食物和水果不能带进图书馆，但是饮料和糖可以带。

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Last night's meteor (流星) shower left many people in the community dissatisfied and demanding answers. According to Gabe Rothschild, Emerald Valley's mayor, people gathered in the suburbs of the city, carrying heavy telescopes, expecting to watch the brightly burning meteors passing through the sky. What they found instead was a sky so brightened by the city's lights that it darkened the light of the meteors passing overhead.

"My family was so frustrated," admitted town resident Duane Cosby, "We wanted to make this an unforgettable family outing, but it turned out to be a huge disappointment."

Astronomers — scientists who study stars and planets — have been complaining about this problem for decades. They say that light pollution prevents them from seeing objects in the sky that they could see quite easily in the past. They call on people and the government to take measures to fight against it.

There is yet a population besides professional and amateur star observers that suffers even more from light pollution. This population consists of birds, bats, frogs, snakes, etc. For example, outdoor lighting severely affects migrating (迁徙的) birds. According to the International Dark-Sky Association, "100 million birds a year throughout North America die in crashes with lighted buildings and towers."

Countless more animal casualties (伤亡) result from the use of artificial lighting. Clearly, people enjoy the benefits of lighting their evenings, but some scientists think it can be harmful for humans, too. They worry that exposure to light while sleeping can increase a person's chances of getting cancer.

Emerald Valley is only one community that is becoming aware of the negative effects of light pollution. For years, Flagstaff, Arizona, has enforced lighting regulations in its city in order to assist astronomers at the Lowell Observatory. Similar efforts have been made worldwide, and a movement is underway to remind us to turn off lights when we are not using them, so that other creatures can also enjoy a dark night.

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1. Last night's meteor (流星) shower left many people in the community dissatisfied and demanding answers. What they found instead was a sky so brightened by the city's lights that it darkened the light of the meteors passing overhead.

句型拆分：结果状语so...that...。

中文翻译：昨晚的流星雨，让社区里很多人都很不满，想要个说法。根据翡翠谷的市长加布·罗斯柴尔德的说法，人们聚集在城市的郊区，带着沉重的望远镜，想要看明亮的流星划过天空。结果他们发现，城市的灯光把天空照得太亮了，把流星的光都盖过了。

2. Astronomers — scientists who study stars and planets — have been complaining about this problem for decades. They say that light pollution prevents them from seeing objects in the sky that they could see quite easily in the past.

句型拆分：同位语解释天文学家，宾语从句that...。

中文翻译：天文学家——也就是研究星星和行星的科学家——已经抱怨这个问题几十年了，他们说，光污染让他们看不到天上的东西，那些东西他们以前很容易就能看到。

3. There is yet a population besides professional and amateur star observers that suffers even more from light pollution. This population consists of birds, bats, frogs, snakes, etc. For example, outdoor lighting severely affects migrating (迁徙的) birds.

句型拆分：定语从句that suffers...。

中文翻译：除了专业和业余的观星者，还有一群生物，受光污染的影响更大，那就是鸟、蝙蝠、青蛙、蛇这些动物，比如，户外的灯光严重影响了迁徙的鸟。

4. Countless more animal casualties (伤亡) result from the use of artificial lighting. Clearly, people enjoy the benefits of lighting their evenings, but some scientists think it can be harmful for humans, too. They worry that exposure to light while sleeping can increase a person's chances of getting cancer.

句型拆分：宾语从句that...。

中文翻译：无数的动物伤亡，都是因为人工照明。显然，人们享受晚上照明的好处，但一些科学家认为，这对人类也有害，他们担心，睡觉的时候暴露在光里，会增加得癌症的风险。

5. For years, Flagstaff, Arizona, has enforced lighting regulations in its city in order to assist astronomers at the Lowell Observatory. Similar efforts have been made worldwide, and a movement is underway to remind us to turn off lights when we are not using them, so that other creatures can also enjoy a dark night.

句型拆分：目的状语in order to...，结果状语so that...。

中文翻译：多年来，亚利桑那州的弗拉格斯塔夫，已经在城市里实施了照明规定，来帮助洛厄尔天文台的天文学家。全世界都有类似的努力，还有一个运动，提醒我们不用灯的时候关掉，这样其他的生物也能享受黑夜。

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Poet William Stafford once said that we are defined more by the detours (绕行路) in life than by the narrow road toward goals. I like this image. But it was quite by accident that I discovered the deep meaning of his words.

For years we made the long drive from our home in Seattle to my parents' home in Boise in nine hours. We traveled the way most people do: the fastest, shortest, easiest road, especially when I was alone with four noisy, restless kids who hate confinement (限制) and have strong opinions about everything.

Road trips felt risky, so I would drive fast, stopping only when I had to. We would stick to the freeways and arrive tired.

But then Banner, our lamb was born. He was rejected by his mama days before our planned trip to Boise. I had two choices: leave Banner with my husband, or take him with me. My husband made the decision for me.

That is how I found myself on the road with four kids, a baby lamb and nothing but my everlasting optimism to see me through. We took the country roads out of necessity. We had to stop every hour, let Banner shake out his legs and feed him. The kids chased him and one another. They'd get back in the car breathless and energized, smelling fresh from the cold air.

We explored side roads, catching grasshoppers in waist-high grass. Even if we simply looked out of the car windows at baby pigs following their mother, or fish leaping out of the water, it was better than the best ride down the freeway. Here was life. And new horizons (见识).

We eventually arrived at my parents' doorstep astonishingly fresh and full of stories.

I grew brave with the trip back home and creative with my disciplining technique. On an empty section of road, everyone started quarreling. I stopped the car, ordered all kids out and told them to meet me up ahead. I parked my car half a mile away and read my book in sweet silence.

Some road trips are by necessity fast and straight. But that trip with Banner opened our eyes to a world available to anyone adventurous enough to wander around and made me realize that a detour may uncover the best part of a journey — and the best part of yourself.

原文逐段解析

1. Poet William Stafford once said that we are defined more by the detours (绕行路) in life than by the narrow road toward goals. I like this image. But it was quite by accident that I discovered the deep meaning of his words.

句型拆分：宾语从句that...，强调句it was...that...。

中文翻译：诗人威廉·斯塔福德曾经说过，定义我们的，更多的是人生的弯路，而不是通往目标的窄路。我很喜欢这个说法，但我是偶然才发现了这句话的深层含义。

2. For years we made the long drive from our home in Seattle to my parents' home in Boise in nine hours. We traveled the way most people do: the fastest, shortest, easiest road, especially when I was alone with four noisy, restless kids who hate confinement (限制) and have strong opinions about everything.

句型拆分：定语从句who hate...。

中文翻译：多年来，我们从西雅图的家，开车去博伊西的父母家，9小时就到了，我们和大多数人一样，走最快、最短、最容易的路，尤其是我一个人带四个吵闹、坐不住的孩子的时候，他们讨厌被限制，对什么都有意见。

3. But then Banner, our lamb was born. He was rejected by his mama days before our planned trip to Boise. I had two choices: leave Banner with my husband, or take him with me. My husband made the decision for me.

句型拆分：同位语our lamb，解释Banner。

中文翻译：但是后来，我们的小羊班纳出生了，在我们计划去博伊西的前几天，它被羊妈妈抛弃了。我有两个选择：把班纳留给我老公，或者带着它一起，我老公帮我做了决定。

4. That is how I found myself on the road with four kids, a baby lamb and nothing but my everlasting optimism to see me through. We took the country roads out of necessity. We had to stop every hour, let Banner shake out his legs and feed him.

句型拆分：表语从句That is how...。

中文翻译：就这样，我带着四个孩子，一只小羊，还有我永远的乐观，上路了。我们不得不走乡村路，因为我们必须每小时停一次，让班纳伸伸腿，喂它吃东西。

5. We explored side roads, catching grasshoppers in waist-high grass. Even if we simply looked out of the car windows at baby pigs following their mother, or fish leaping out of the water, it was better than the best ride down the freeway. Here was life. And new horizons (见识).

句型拆分：让步状语从句Even if...。

中文翻译：我们探索小路，在齐腰高的草里抓蚂蚱，哪怕我们只是看看窗外，小猪跟着妈妈，或者鱼跳出水面，这都比走高速好太多了，这才是生活，这才是新的见识。

6. But that trip with Banner opened our eyes to a world available to anyone adventurous enough to wander around and made me realize that a detour may uncover the best part of a journey — and the best part of yourself.

句型拆分：并列的谓语opened和made，宾语从句that...。

中文翻译：但是这次和班纳的旅行，让我们看到了一个世界，只要你足够有勇气去逛逛，就能看到，也让我意识到，弯路可能会揭开旅程最好的部分——也是你自己最好的部分。

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When asked about happiness, we usually think of something extraordinary, an absolute delight, which seems to get rarer the older we get.

For kids, happiness has a magical quality. Their delight at winning a race or getting a new bike is unreserved (毫不掩饰的).

In the teenage years the concept of happiness changes. Suddenly it's conditional on such things as excitement, love and popularity. I can still recall the excitement of being invited to dance with the most attractive boy at the school party.

In adulthood the things that bring deep joy — love, marriage, birth — also bring responsibility and the risk of loss. For adults, happiness is complicated (复杂的).

My definition of happiness is "the capacity for enjoyment". The more we can enjoy what we have, the happier we are. It's easy to overlook the pleasure we get from the company of friends, the freedom to live where we please, and even good health.

I experienced my little moments of pleasure yesterday. First I was overjoyed when I shut the last lunch-box and had the house to myself. Then I spent an uninterrupted morning writing, which I love. When the kids and my husband came home, I enjoyed their noise after the quiet of the day.

Psychologists tell us that to be happy we need a mix of enjoyable leisure time and satisfying work. I don't think that my grandmother, who raised 14 children, had much of either. She did have a network of close friends and family, and maybe this is what satisfied her.

We, however, with so many choices and such pressure to succeed in every area, have turned happiness into one more thing we've got to have. We've so self-conscious about our "right" to it that it's making us miserable. So we chase it and equal it with wealth and success, without noticing that the people who have those things aren't necessarily happier.

Happiness isn't about what happens to us — it's about how we see what happens to us. It's the skillful way of finding a positive for every negative. It's not wishing for what we don't have, but enjoying what we do possess.

原文逐段解析

1. When asked about happiness, we usually think of something extraordinary, an absolute delight, which seems to get rarer the older we get.

句型拆分：非限制性定语从句which...。

中文翻译：当被问到幸福的时候，我们通常会想到一些特别的事，纯粹的快乐，而这似乎越长大，就越少见。

2. For kids, happiness has a magical quality. Their delight at winning a race or getting a new bike is unreserved (毫不掩饰的).

句型拆分：简单句，解释孩子的幸福。

中文翻译：对孩子来说，幸福有魔力，他们赢了比赛，或者拿到新自行车的快乐，是毫不掩饰的。

3. My definition of happiness is "the capacity for enjoyment". The more we can enjoy what we have, the happier we are. It's easy to overlook the pleasure we get from the company of friends, the freedom to live where we please, and even good health.

句型拆分：比较句The more...the more...。

中文翻译：我对幸福的定义是“享受的能力”，我们越能享受我们拥有的，我们就越幸福。我们很容易忽略，朋友的陪伴、住在自己喜欢的地方的自由，甚至健康，这些都能带来快乐。

4. Psychologists tell us that to be happy we need a mix of enjoyable leisure time and satisfying work. I don't think that my grandmother, who raised 14 children, had much of either. She did have a network of close friends and family, and maybe this is what satisfied her.

句型拆分：宾语从句that...，非限制性定语从句who...。

中文翻译：心理学家告诉我们，要幸福，我们需要愉快的休闲时间，还有满意的工作。我觉得我奶奶，她养了14个孩子，这两个都没多少，但她有亲密的朋友和家人，也许这就是让她满足的东西。

5. Happiness isn't about what happens to us — it's about how we see what happens to us. It's the skillful way of finding a positive for every negative. It's not wishing for what we don't have, but enjoying what we do possess.

句型拆分：并列句，解释幸福的本质。

中文翻译：幸福不是发生在我们身上的事，而是我们怎么看发生在我们身上的事，是在每个负面的事里找到正面的东西，不是渴望我们没有的，而是享受我们已经拥有的。

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My name is Clara. I still remember that chilly December day, sitting in science class. I'd finished a worksheet early and picked up a TIME for Kids magazine. A piece of news caught my eye: NASA was holding an essay contest to name its Mars rover (火星探测器). Before I even knew anything else about it, a single word flooded my 11-year-old mind: Curiosity.

I couldn't wait for the bell to ring so I could get started on my essay. That afternoon, I raced home, sat down at the computer, and typed until my fingers ached. "Curiosity is an everlasting flame that burns in everyone's mind..."

Five months later, my mom received a phone call, and immediately, a wide smile spread across her face.

On August 5, 2012, at 10:31 p.m., the rover named Curiosity touched down safely on the surface of Mars, and I was honored to have a front-row seat in NASA.

Curiosity is such an important part of who I am. I have always been fascinated by the stars, the planets, the sky and the universe. I remember as a little girl, my grandmother and I would sit together in the backyard for hours. She'd tell me stories and point out the stars. Grandma lived in China, thousands of miles away from my home in Kansas, but the stars kept us together even when we were apart. They were always there, yet there was so much I didn't know about them. That's what I love so much about space.

People often ask me why we go to faraway places like Mars. My answer is simple: because we're curious. We human beings do not just hole up in one place. We are constantly wondering and trying to find out what's over the hill and beyond the horizon.

原文逐段解析

1. My name is Clara. I still remember that chilly December day, sitting in science class. I'd finished a worksheet early and picked up a TIME for Kids magazine. A piece of news caught my eye: NASA was holding an essay contest to name its Mars rover (火星探测器).

句型拆分：同位语解释新闻的内容。

中文翻译：我叫克拉拉，我还记得那个寒冷的12月的一天，我在科学课上，我提前做完了作业，拿起了一本《儿童时代》杂志，一条新闻吸引了我：NASA在举办一个征文比赛，给他们的火星探测器起名。

2. Before I even knew anything else about it, a single word flooded my 11-year-old mind: Curiosity.

句型拆分：时间状语Before...。

中文翻译：我还没来得及了解别的，一个词就冲进了我11岁的脑袋：好奇号。

3. On August 5, 2012, at 10:31 p.m., the rover named Curiosity touched down safely on the surface of Mars, and I was honored to have a front-row seat in NASA.

句型拆分：并列句，解释探测器着陆，还有她的荣幸。

中文翻译：2012年8月5日，晚上10点31分，名叫好奇号的探测器安全地在火星表面着陆了，我很荣幸，能在NASA现场观看。

4. Curiosity is such an important part of who I am. I have always been fascinated by the stars, the planets, the sky and the universe. I remember as a little girl, my grandmother and I would sit together in the backyard for hours. She'd tell me stories and point out the stars.

句型拆分：宾语从句who I am。

中文翻译：好奇号是我很重要的一部分，我一直都对星星、行星、天空、宇宙很着迷。我记得小时候，我和奶奶会在后院坐几个小时，她给我讲故事，指给我看星星。

5. People often ask me why we go to faraway places like Mars. My answer is simple: because we're curious. We human beings do not just hole up in one place. We are constantly wondering and trying to find out what's over the hill and beyond the horizon.

句型拆分：宾语从句why...。

中文翻译：人们经常问我，为什么我们要去火星这么远的地方，我的答案很简单：因为我们好奇。人类不会只待在一个地方，我们总是好奇，想要知道山的那边，地平线的那边有什么。

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题目要求

假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。

• 个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）；
• 组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）；
• 组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）；
• 表达竞选的愿望。

注意：

1. 词数不少于100；
2. 请勿提及真实学校名称；
3. 可适当的加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇： 副主席：vice president 竞选：run for

满分范文

Good afternoon, my dear friends.

My name is Li Jin, I'm running for the vice president of the English Club.

I think I am qualified for this position. First, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. Besides, I have been learning English for many years, and I am good at English speaking and writing. I have also organized some small English activities before, so I have rich experience.

If I am elected, I have some plans for the club. First, I will organize more activities in our school, like English lectures, English parties, to help everyone practice their English and have fun. Second, I will organize inter-school activities, like English debate competitions and speech contests, so that we can communicate with students from other schools, learn from each other.

I really hope you can vote for me. I will work hard to make our club better.

Thank you.

范文逐句解析

1. I think I am qualified for this position. First, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. Besides, I have been learning English for many years, and I am good at English speaking and writing. I have also organized some small English activities before, so I have rich experience.

句型拆分：并列句，介绍自己的优势，逻辑清晰。

中文翻译：我觉得我能胜任这个职位，首先，我性格外向，很擅长和别人沟通。而且，我学英语很多年了，我的英语口语和写作都很好，我之前也组织过一些小的英语活动，所以我有丰富的经验。

2. If I am elected, I have some plans for the club. First, I will organize more activities in our school, like English lectures, English parties, to help everyone practice their English and have fun.

句型拆分：条件状语从句If...，介绍校内的活动。

中文翻译：如果我当选了，我对俱乐部有一些计划，首先，我会组织更多校内的活动，比如英语讲座、英语晚会，帮大家练习英语，也玩得开心。

3. Second, I will organize inter-school activities, like English debate competitions and speech contests, so that we can communicate with students from other schools, learn from each other.

句型拆分：目的状语从句so that...，介绍校际的活动。

中文翻译：然后，我会组织校际的活动，比如英语辩论赛和演讲比赛，这样我们就能和其他学校的学生交流，互相学习。

4. I really hope you can vote for me. I will work hard to make our club better.

句型拆分：表达竞选的愿望，符合题目的要求。

中文翻译：我真的希望你们能给我投票，我会努力让我们的俱乐部变得更好。

写作要点解析

1. 要点覆盖：完整覆盖了四个要求的要点：个人优势、校内活动、校际活动、竞选愿望，完全符合题目的要求。
2. 逻辑连贯：文章的顺序很清晰，先介绍自己，然后讲计划，最后请求投票，过渡自然，用了First, Second这些词，让结构很清楚。
3. 词汇亮点：用了qualified, outgoing, communicating, inter-school这些合适的词汇，还有rich experience, learn from each other这些短语，很地道。
4. 语法亮点：用了条件状语从句、目的状语从句，语法多样，体现了水平。

易错点提醒

• 注意演讲稿的格式，开头结尾不要写错，题目已经给了，不要自己乱改。
• 不要遗漏要点，四个要点都要覆盖，不然会扣分，比如一定要讲校际的活动，不能只讲校内的。
• 注意时态，介绍自己的优势用现在时，介绍计划用将来时，不要用错时态。
• 注意不要提到真实的学校名字，题目里说了，不然会扣分。